Moriah Leila

While I get what you are trying to say, this poem comes off as one of two things: 1.) A prayer 2.) A sermon I think you were trying to ...

Very original, even though the title says otherwise. It was actually the title that caught my eye. While it was obviously the random musings of a frustrated poet, I think ...

Hi there! Nice poems. I really enjoyed the first one, I thought it very well-written and had beautiful imagery. The stifled heat reminded me of a time that I was ...

I liked this poem. The structure is so easy to follow and even easier to critique. You did a very good job with your adjectives, although I do wish you ...

Wow, this is really great writing. I love how you don't come right out and say that she is playing the piano. And how her music was not only the ...

I really like the idea behind this poem. It reminds me of when my great-grandmother died, and how I just wanted to be alone to cope with her death. I ...

Very good. I didn't see the ending coming at all. My only critique is about the punctuation. Normally you punctuate poetry just like you do prose. If you wrote this ...

I have to agree with the other two that this poem has no cohesive theme. What is the poem about exactly? Maybe you could change some of the lines so ...

I thought you did a really good job on this poem. You put in enough emotion and detail, while still making it clear what the theme was. But you didn't ...

A poem that turns snow into something evil and deadly, I bow down before you. It is so original, I must give you praise! So I am guessing that the ...

Very cool and obviously original since I have no idea who Nyx is. However, I want more. From what the others have said, I sense that Nyx is a morbid, ...

I can't say I enjoyed this poem too much, but maybe that is because I voted for McCain! Either way, I have only a few nitpicks. The first is pretty ...

I totally agree with you about the power of writing. I think the idea behind this poem is solid, I just felt like it came across more as an argument ...

I really enjoyed this poem, I thought it was funny, in a morbid sort of way. I liked the creative way that everyone died, and I really thought it was ...

I like the poem as a whole, although I was a bit confused towards the end. How does one suck up their cheeks? And to what purpose does this action ...